Some of the info in the biography was a little confusing. "At the end Of her company’s first year it’s total sales was at Her company went public in 1965 and by then her workforce was 3,000."
This blog was great, but I noticed a few typos. You wrote "At the end Of her company’s first year it’s total sales was at Her company went public in 1965 and by then her workforce was 3,000 ." That does not make sense. Also, three times you wrote "Cadilac's". When you write Cadilac in plural form you do not add a ' because the Cadilac does not own anything.
Some of the info in the biography was a little confusing. "At the end Of her company’s first year it’s total sales was at Her company went public in 1965 and by then her workforce was 3,000."
ReplyDeleteLike Allyssa said your biograhpy information was confusing. It was a little difficult to understand at times but overall it's a nice blog.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alex, some of the biography was confusing at times but it was a great blog in general
ReplyDeleteI would put your citing for your pictures at the bottom of the blog. But nice job(:
ReplyDeleteSome of the information was confusing and hard to understand.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could have given more information on the first influence so i could have understood it a little better.
ReplyDeletePut a little bit more pictures and information.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ciara, the information was confusing at times.
ReplyDeleteOverall this blog ROCKED! but I thought in biography was missing some pieces about her chillhood.
ReplyDeleteThis blog was great, but I noticed a few typos.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote "At the end Of her company’s first year it’s total sales was at Her company went public in 1965 and by then her workforce was 3,000 ." That does not make sense. Also, three times you wrote "Cadilac's". When you write Cadilac in plural form you do not add a ' because the Cadilac does not own anything.